What a fun little start! I read the little introduction to the characters, so I'm a little sad that Cloud is going to end up having to start over again with someone new. But I'm certainly intrigued to see how you do it. I'm sure it will tug at all my hearstrings!
Thank you! Yes, he's totally inlove with Moon, isn't he? I'm not the nicest writer to my characters, all things considered, so all going well it will tug at the heartstrings! lol.